The Third Plate

by HuntingHalcyon
1 part
     
97 readers
     
114 votes
 

The Third Plate

1 part
     
97 readers
     
114 votes
     
  

by HuntingHalcyon
Complete - Updated Aug 04, 2016  
 

Memories can save us. They can also drown us. What would you do?

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Left me wanting more ... like when you finish the last page of that book you love and you never wanted it to end and for a short story to be able to leave you with that same feeling, pretty powerful writing. Halcyon hunter can't wait to read more of your work.

Anonymous (56562361) - December 29, 2016 at 12:11am

Nice twist, I felt all the emotions of a novel packed into one page. My kinda story!

mattyc - November 28, 2016 at 11:09am

I was left wondering what was going on then thought oh yes I want a sandwich. Sandwich please!

Anonymous (28608476) - August 24, 2016 at 2:28am

The ability to bring a reader into a story, feeling all that the writer describes as opposed to merely being an observer on the sidelines, is a talent. Each sentence is original, no common or predictable phrases here. I was completely drawn in and, during that moment, could feel the mother's anguish and her husband's sad frustration. Well done!

Anonymous (69390014) - August 05, 2016 at 5:09pm

Very moving, I want to read more!

Anonymous (56868548) - August 05, 2016 at 2:44am

Thank you. I wonder if there is a longer story in there and this is just a tiny snapshot.

Writer - August 05, 2016 at 3:04am

This is how to convey emotion. I found myself transported into a moment full of love, loss and sadness. A wonderfully descriptive moment. I want more. Thank you HuntingHalcyon for sharing this.

Anonymous (63162606) - August 04, 2016 at 12:32pm

Thank you for reading!

Writer - August 05, 2016 at 12:11am



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