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Memories can save us. They can also drown us. What would you do?
#5 in Fiction
1 part / 1 page, updated Aug 04, 2016

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Joined: August 04, 2016
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robertrobert writes:
Hello! Just read your story and it was great! Keep up the great work! I just released mine, feedback would be greatly appreciated
February 24, 2017 [reply]

User 56562361 commented on your work The Third Plate
Left me wanting more ... like when you finish the last page of that book you love and you never wanted it to end and for a short story to be able to leave you with that same feeling, pretty powerful writing. Halcyon hunter can't wait to read more of your work.
December 29, 2016 [view]

User 81344330 commented on your work The Third Plate
Nice twist, I felt all the emotions of a novel packed into one page. My kinda story!
November 28, 2016 [view]

User 28608476 commented on your work The Third Plate
I was left wondering what was going on then thought oh yes I want a sandwich. Sandwich please!
August 24, 2016 [view]

User 69390014 commented on your work The Third Plate
The ability to bring a reader into a story, feeling all that the writer describes as opposed to merely being an observer on the sidelines, is a talent. Each sentence is original, no common or predictable phrases here. I was completely drawn in and, during that moment, could feel the mother's anguish and her husband's sad frustration. Well done!
August 05, 2016 [view]

User 56868548 commented on your work The Third Plate
Very moving, I want to read more!
August 05, 2016 [view]
Thank you. I wonder if there is a longer story in there and this is just a tiny snapshot.
August 05, 2016

User 63162606 commented on your work The Third Plate
This is how to convey emotion. I found myself transported into a moment full of love, loss and sadness. A wonderfully descriptive moment. I want more. Thank you HuntingHalcyon for sharing this.
August 04, 2016 [view]
Thank you for reading!
August 05, 2016

New work released
August 04, 2016 [reply]