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This is a real love story where the man leaves the woman with the devastating words...I need to go for the real ...
#4 in Spirituality  •  #1 in Contemporary  •  #2 in Romance
2 parts / 29 pages, updated Nov 20, 2013
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This is a collection of sweet, simple, heart-warming short stories, and each parable has insight into the human psyche. ...
#1 in Mystery  •  #5 in Spirituality  •  #2 in Contemporary
1 part / 11 pages, updated Dec 28, 2013
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This is the story of a woman who goes to a dance class and falls in love with the dance class teacher. It isn't a ...
#32 in Spirituality  •  #30 in Contemporary  •  #40 in Romance
1 part / 13 pages, updated Dec 28, 2013

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Joined: August 14, 2013
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User 96805 commented on your work A Cautionary Tale
Cautionary Tale

First couple of paragraphs very engaging but it needs to move on a little quicker. We need to know that this woman has a bit of fight in her, otherwise its difficult to feel any empathy. First person would give this piece more teeth. I felt like I was getting all the info second hand, which I was, making it all less believable. writing from
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